Dearchanudsa.wordpress.com (Dear Chanudsa)
Hi Dear! I’m always interested in any infographic that involves FOOD. So I approve your choice. This sounds like a very interesting dessert and it is great you are choosing to do a Thai dish, especially because many people in New Zealand may not know about it… Well I sure didn’t! It looks like there are many components and ingredients to this dish, it will be a good thing to show each of the processes. My only concern is I wonder if you can replicate the dessert in illustrator to make it look like what it actually looks like in real life, but I’m sure you have already thought this through. It would be good to use lots of patterns and textures to give your images a 3-D mouthwatering effect. Good luck!
Soseviscom.wordpress.com (Sose Morris)
Hey Sose! Some interesting compositions you have here. The one’s that stuck out the most to me were the first and second ones. They are very creative and eye-catching. Particularly the polaroid one, it will appeal to a young adult audience who are in to this trend of polaroids. It is also very hip and current with the youth culture. I do agree that you may face some issues with space, but if you make the illustrations very visually explanatory, that will reduce the need for more writing. Seeing more detailed images will also be good as it applies to the ‘camera’ theme of your infographic. The first composition will be very relevant with your topic and you can be very creative with where you place your illustrations. But I agree with what you wrote, that it will be very limited with the space provided. Perhaps you could even combine the 1 + 2 sketches to have a polaroid coming out of the camera that explains or illustrates something too. Or you can incorporate classic tape-like film that will give you long strips of space to add more illustrations or just added imagery. Just another idea 🙂 Good luck for the rest of your assignment!
Thehausofviscom.wordpress.com (Spencer Fotu)
Hey Spencer! Wow what an epic, and creative idea. I would have never thought to have done something like this. This has made me want to slightly rethink my idea. I approve of this as I too consider my self to be a bit of a Little Monster. This is will give you so many different choices on how you can approach this infographic. Because Lady Gaga is quite a unique and eccentric person, you could fit many different themes into this. It would be cool to see a bit of meaty background as tribute to her famous/controversial meat dress. Or have glittery horns sticking up from the border. That would make your image look so funky. I feel like a famous part of Lady Gaga is her strong angles and sharp edges to all of her outfits/costumes. I think it would be cool to see that incorporated in the composition or background of your infographic. You could even have a small section in the shape of an egg that could hold extra ‘tips’ on becoming a Little Monster, to refer back to when she marinated inside that egg once. That was pretty unique. These are just some random ideas that I hope help fuel some more amazing ones for your final image. I am genuinely excited to see the processes of what it takes to become a Little Monster.
vitamorrison.wordpress.com (Vita Morrison)
Hi Vita! Now this is an infographic that I would love to see come together. I think secretly, we all want to be a little bit famous 😉 I think it’s great that you are taking the ‘simple but effective’ approach as I am doing that too. I believe that a good infographic is easy to follow yet still eye-catching. I think the colour scheme you have chosen here is very suitable to the topic you are doing, very pink and girly. It’s great that the word ‘Celebrity’ is in a different font, as it makes it stand out alot more. It would be cool to see the girly theme incorporated throughout the rest of your infographic like a bit of sparkle, glitter, kiss marks etc just to add more illustrations. But keep it simple and sweet. Good luck for the rest of your assignment!
https://chloesvisuallycommunicative.wordpress.com/2015/06/02/wip-week-four/ (Chloe Blommerde)
Hi Chloe! first of all, great idea you have here, especially because there are so many gals (and guys) who love seeing extra tips and advice on applying makeup properly. Nice compilation of images you have here. So here is my opinion: as for the liquid foundation, I do agree with what you wrote to only use one swipe instead of three. The first image is the type of swipe of foundation that is used more commonly than the second one (did that make sense?) in most fashion blogs and magazines so I recommend using that one as its more recognisable. For powder foundation, the one on the right looks alot more like foundation where as the one on the left could easily be mistaken for cooking herbs (just saying). In terms of bronzer, you’ve chosen a nice simple image, maybe in your infographic you could add a bit of swirls and a blend of other browns just so it does not look too simple compared to the other illustrations. For example the ‘brick’ style bronzers from Bobbi Brown have alot of texture, colour and shimmer http://www.bobbibrowncosmetics.com/products/14020/Makeup/Face-and-Cheek/Bronzerhttp://www.bobbibrowncosmetics.com/products/14020/Makeup/Face-and-Cheek/Bronzer
I quite like the fourth image you have uploaded of the blush as it’s chunkier and seems more pigmented. But just another idea, maybe you could take a similar approach with the blush that I suggested with the bronzer, to go for that ‘brick’ pattern, just so it may be easier to illustrate. Anyways, good luck for the rest of your assignment and I look forward to what your final image will look like! Ciao bella!